I forgot to mention before, but rofl the Schwann Brigade. ♥
I thought the best part in terms of just plain Awesome and quality of writing was the whole last scene on the roof. <3 Awesome balance of the internal thought on Flynn's part and the actual physical fight.
Anyhow, looking back a second time, I really, honestly didn't see anything that I can criticize. Well-written and IC -- as always -- and I particularly admired how you really... how to phrase it... you don't hold back when it comes to the BFFness. Other BFF fics I've read, as good as some of them were, just lacked the real PUNCH that yours has; they tend to stop at a certain point while you go the whole nine yards. ......Again, not sure if I'm making sense here, but it sounds right in my heeeaaaad. XD; ...IDK, YOU'RE REALLY AWESOME AT PORTRAYING BEST FRIENDSHIPS, I GUESS IS WHAT I'M STRUGGLING TO SAY.
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I thought the best part in terms of just plain Awesome and quality of writing was the whole last scene on the roof. <3 Awesome balance of the internal thought on Flynn's part and the actual physical fight.
Anyhow, looking back a second time, I really, honestly didn't see anything that I can criticize. Well-written and IC -- as always -- and I particularly admired how you really... how to phrase it... you don't hold back when it comes to the BFFness. Other BFF fics I've read, as good as some of them were, just lacked the real PUNCH that yours has; they tend to stop at a certain point while you go the whole nine yards. ......Again, not sure if I'm making sense here, but it sounds right in my heeeaaaad. XD; ...IDK, YOU'RE REALLY AWESOME AT PORTRAYING BEST FRIENDSHIPS, I GUESS IS WHAT I'M STRUGGLING TO SAY.