Oh my gosh this was SO GOOD. =) I too prefer Yuki with Tohru over Kyo with Tohru! =) You got everything perfectly in character and this was wonderfully set up and planned out! It was not ramble-y at all! =)

I wish the creator of Fruits Basket did an alternate ending so people could see how it would be if she got with Yuki. But sadly she didnt do it...oh well, Ill just have to do it! Haha! XD I plan to make a doujin that is basically like if Tohru and Yuki got together and the one Tohru had true feelings for was Yuki. And Yuki will realize he loves Tohru much more than a mother figure. Now the only problem is Kyo...hmmm... guess Ill put him with Kagura. Bwahaha! XD I can see Kyo's pissed off face now. Hee hee hee...XD