Okay, I didn't comment on this one? I seriously thought I had. I like it-- it addresses the issues we've discussed before, the way she was pretty much put on a shelf when younger, then passed off to Tsunade when he was completely free to seriously train her. You have to wonder why Kishi did that.

You really captured her, though the hurt is now cold, it's still there. And this is the Kakashi I would expect- ashamed of himself and willing to make amends.