ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wordsworn 2008-08-17 10:29 am (UTC)

Oh, *ouch*

“What are you doing here, Sakura,” he asks, though it’s not really asking because it doesn’t sound like a question, and it doesn’t have to because he knows the answer already.

“Please, Sensei,” she says, her voice soft, and like him, she isn’t really asking.


Nailed the tone of voice. I can hear how defeated they are in my head.

“I’m not what you want, Sakura,” he murmurs, part of him, some very selfish, deeply-buried part of him, wishing that this wasn’t true

Awesome.

and like all good medic-nin, she’s got that delicious sense of perfectly-controlled chakra humming just beneath her skin and making her touch almost electric, and for once she’s calling him Kakashi rather than Sensei.

Such a sexy, in character way to describe Sakura.

Fantastic job.

*memes*

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