"Name" - SasuHina (Naruto)

[wordsworn]

...Tooootally forgot to post this on Sunday. Sorry, Phase. :|

This might be a part of something else someday, but it doesn't fit with the longer drabble I'm currently working on.


[SasuHina, 'Name']

“Sasuke-san—”

“You don’t need to be so formal,” he interrupts before she can really say anything.

She blinks those big, pale eyes, momentarily off-balance, before stuttering out a tentative, “S-Sasuke…kun?”

The pained expression passes over his face so briefly Hinata almost thinks she imagined it, but she knows she didn’t. His face itself is expressionless, but his eyes have gone so very cold, and she twiddles her fingers desperately, wondering just what she’s said wrong.

“Sasuke,” he says firmly. “Just Sasuke.”

Comments

Oi Vay

[battiegotriddim.livejournal.com]

I am in love with your writing.
I'm just gonna keep saying that.

I thought my diminishing fangirl-ism would affect my thoughts about this drabble.
But it doesn't.
It just brings more of what I had forgotten about beloved Naruto, back.

Thank you.
You've saved me so many times. :)

- Anj

[alory-shannon.livejournal.com]

As always, you are far too kind. ♥

I'm honoured that you can find that kind of worth in my writing. It makes me want to work harder, and be so much better, so I can be more deserving of that sort of compliment.

And it's understandable that your Naruto fangirlism would be fading--you have your three beautiful boys and their story to tell now, after all. :]

[kirbywarrior1.livejournal.com]

XD That's wonderful. This should be a short comic or something. The facial expressions would be priceless. >> zomg as chibis no less! *pooooooonnnnnnnnnddddeeeeerrrrrssssssss*

[alory-shannon.livejournal.com]

Thanks! And haha, as if you don't already have enough things that you're supposed to be doing. Don't let something like this distract you!

...But no, not as chibis, because this fic actually means a little more than it looks like. "Sasuke-kun" is what Sakura always calls Sasuke. ;]

[kirbywarrior1.livejournal.com]

D: awww. Now it's more touching than just... funny. Which was how I read it.

Yeah... I kinda do, don't I? >> Man, so many things to do, so many things @_@

[its-game-time.livejournal.com]

lol, no problem. I was actually thinking that the Death Note one was for last week, so you totally could've slipped by. XD;

/o/~ <3

[irishmastermind.livejournal.com]

This is such a great moment! I love it!